he gets condemned a lot
and
sometimes
i flee
but then
he forgives
he gets scourged a lot
and
sometimes
he bleeds
but then
he loves
he gets nailed a lot
and
sometimes
he dies
but then
he rises
(c) Mar 1, 2012 Nissa Annakindt
I wrote the first draft of this in connection with some poetry prompts I was giving in another blog post. I liked it well enough to expand it and declare it a real poem rather than just an example.
This poem was linked at Poets United 89th Poetry Pantry.
Hi! I'm Nissa. This is one of my earlier blogs. My main blog is My Antimatter Writing Life on Wordpress.com, but I keep this up both for my archives and because I like the way Blogger blogrolls work. I only post here once in a while, but thanks for stopping by.
Thursday, March 1, 2012
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Lovely done. I am participating in the Lenten Haiku Journey of Cloacked Monk. And I love it. Writing haiku (I am a haiku poet) on my way to Easter, to the Resurrection.
ReplyDeletei really like this
ReplyDeletea different spin of words
to describe Him
excellent