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Friday, January 3, 2014

Review: Writing Crime and Suspense Fiction by Lesley Grant Adamson



Book: Writing Crime & Suspense Fiction
Author: Lesley Grant-Adamson
Publisher: Teach Yourself/NTC Publications/Hodder & Stoughton
Year: 1996

There are many books on my writing bookshelf that are basically 'How to Write Genre X', with a number of genres to choose from. But even though 2014 is the first year I've thought seriously of writing a mystery, this book stands out for me among all the genre guides in all the genres.

The reason is that this book, in addition to the usual introduce-the-genre stuff, has writing exercises which are not the usual writing-book busywork exercises. The exercises in this book take you through the steps of planning out and writing your novel, from the early vague idea stage to writing the chapters.

It's a little like having an experienced writer hold your hand through the noveling process, which is great both for young/first time writers and also for insecure writers with low self-esteem and a history of 'failure' in writing (like me.)

What if you are not a mystery writer? I do think the exercises can be adapted by writers in other genres.  There is mystery in every fiction story, if only the mystery of what will happen next.

One thing the prospective reader of this book should keep in mind is that the author is from England and writes in terms of the UK mystery fiction scene. She also mentions some aspects of American mystery writing. While the book is still of much use to the Australian, New Zealander, South African and other English-speaking writer, or other writers from Germany to Outer Mongolia, there is the chance that taking this book too much to heart might trigger the British is Better syndrome.

The British is Better syndrome is what you see when the US elite/liberal class touts even rather vulgar British sitcoms as being 'quality television' unlike anything the US could produce and worthy of being enshrined on their PBS network.

British is Better syndrome can also be see when American and other non-British writers assume that the fiction produced by British writers is automatically of higher literary quality, and may lead to misguided attempts to write attempted-British fiction rather than the fiction of one's own nation. Remember that your own nationality and locality is part of what will make your fiction unique, and writers should not be ashamed of coming from a 'wrong' or 'unliterary' country.

One section of the book I found of particular interest, when she writes of mysteries by 'Feminists and Other Axe Grinders'--- what you might call 'message fiction'. She is very much against such fiction getting too preachy, with characters stopping the action to deliver rants against 'the patriarchy' or capitalism or rainforest destruction or what have you. She talks about getting your message across much more subtly--- which is something that Christian writers, among others, can use. (Or atheist writers, for that matter.)

To sum up, I very much recommend this book as an addition to any writer's writing bookshelf. It has a great many useful sections and the writing exercises alone can be worth it for many of us.

Writing Crime & Suspense Fiction: And Getting Published (Teach Yourself Series)

Have you read this book? If so, what is your opinion about it? Or do you have other great genre-writing books you would recommend? Let us know in a comment!
 
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Monday, June 17, 2013

Lonely on the Mountain, part 3


Now, years later and far out on the grass prairie, I was remembering and wondering what I could do that I hadn't done.

No matter which way you looked between you and anywhere else, there was a thousand miles of grass--- and the Sioux.

The Sioux hadn't come upon us yet, but they were about, and every man-jack of us knew it. It could be they hadn't cut our sign yet, but cut it they would, and when they did, they would come for us.

Lonely on the Mountain
Louis L'Amour
1980

This is the third installment of the beginning of Lonely on the Mountain, a western by Louis L'Amour, one of the most popular of American writers.

At this point the first-person narrator, Tell Sackett, brings us from his memory of troubled times of the past to the troubles of the present. He's out on the prairie--- we later learn his mission is to drive a herd of cattle to another Sackett in Canada--- and he is going through Sioux Indian territory--- and the Sioux are not feeling peaceable.

Putting the three sections of the beginning together, what most impresses me is the strong voice of his character. This is essential when you are using a first-person narrator. Such a narrator must show forth his personality and his individuality in the way he speaks. A bland first-person narrator just will not do.

Another interesting thing about 'Lonely on the Mountain'. The first section is first-person POV will Tell Sackett as the POV character. The next section is third-person POV with another member of the Sackett family as the POV character. He keeps hearing that Tell and the others on the cattle drive were killed by Indians. Later in the novel when Tell Sackett is found, we return to his first-person POV.

While this is not a common way of handling point-of-view in a novel, it works very well. Of course, L'Amour was a very experienced writer when he did it.


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Saturday, June 15, 2013

Lonely on the Mountain, part 2


 Two years before, pa had set us to diggin' a well. "Pa?" I asked. "Why dig a well? We've got the creek yonder and three flowin' springs on the place. It's needless work."

He lifted his head, and he looked me right in the eye and said, "Dig a well."

We dug a well.

We grumbled, but when pa said dig, you just naturally dug. And lucky it was, too.

For there came a time when the bed of the creek was dust and the springs that had always flowed weren't flowin'. We had water, though. We had water from a deep, cold well. We watered our stock, we watered our kitchen garden, and we had what was needful for drinkin' because of that well.

*~*~*

Lonely on the Mountain
by Louis L'Amour
1980

This is the second installment of the beginning of this novel. L'Amour has his first-person narrator, Tell Sackett, give us a short word-picture of an incident from his boyhood. It shows what kind of person Pa Sackett was, which explains a lot about how Tell and the other Sackett brothers turned out.

This mini-flashback is risky at the beginning of a novel. L'Amour was at that time a very experienced writer. His first novel was published about 1950. The first book in the Sackett series was published in 1960, so he also had fans eager to hear some Sackett backstory.

But I think even if this had been the first Sackett book, this mini-flashback would have worked. In the voice of the first-person narrator, this mini-flashback is in a way a short description of the character--- not of his looks, but of who he was as a person.


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Thursday, June 13, 2013

Lonely on the Mountain, part 1

There will come a time when you believe everything is finished. That will be the beginning.

Pa said that when I was a boy. There was a hot, dry wind moaning through the hot, dry trees, and we were scared of fire in the woods, knowing that if fire came, all we had would go.

We had crops in the ground, but there'd been no rain for weeks. We were scrapin' the bottom of the barrel for flour and drinkin' coffee made from ground-up beans. We' had our best cow die, and the rest was ganted up, so's you could count every rib.

from
Lonely on the Mountain
Louis L'Amour
published 1980

I've been doing a writing exercise that involves copying out about 300 words of the beginning of novels. This is the first 1/3 of the portion that I copied.


Louis L'Amour had a series, the Sackett series. The first book in that series was written in 1960. This one came along 20 years later. By this time Louis L'Amour was one of the most popular writers in the country. His skill with words can be seen here.

I found this section to be a very powerful opening, which I used for a model in my own WIP. The main character is William Tell Sackett, called Tell. He is featured in several of the Sackett novels and is a character I love.

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Thursday, May 2, 2013

Black Jack: Will Outlaw's Son Repeat Father's Fate? (Free Ebook)

Book: Black Jack
Author: Max Brand (Frederick Schiller Faust)
Genre: Western
Year Published: 1922
Horse's Name: El Sangre
Content Rating: G--- no sex or swearing
Stars: **** Very Good
Link for Free Ebook:  http://manybooks.net/titles/brandmaxetext06blkjk10.html

The book begins with the shooting death of an outlaw, witnessed by spinster ranch owner Elizabeth Cornish and her lazy younger brother Vance. The outlaw, Black Jack, left an orphaned infant son behind.

Vance Cornish, referring to the theory of eugenics popular when the book was written, predicted Black Jack's son would grow up to be just like his old man. Elizabeth not only believed the infant could be spared that fate if carefully reared, she decided to do so herself. Vance predicted the boy would shoot a man before age 25.

Jump forward to just before the boy Terry's 25th birthday. He is a fine young man and proud of the fine family that Elizabeth told him he came from--- he has no clue his real father was an outlaw. He has tamed a wild horse, El Sangre, and won much admiration for his courage and his sense of fair play.

But Vance, whose idle ways have lost him his share of the family ranch, is jealous when Elizabeth proposes to make Terry her heir. He arranges for Terry to learn the truth about his father--- and to be confronted with the man, now a sheriff, who shot Black Jack from ambush. Terry calls the sheriff out, and shoots him in an excruciatingly fair duel.

Terry must now leave the ranch in disgrace. He tries to find honest work, but when he is found out as Black Jack's son he is fired. Only the members of Black Jack's old gang have any interest in helping Terry.

Terry ends up hiring on for ranch work at the home/hideout of the current leader of Black Jack's gang. Here he is pulled closer into a life of crime, much to the dismay of the gang leader's pretty daughter.

The great question of the book is: Does a boy like Terry have any chance at all of leading a morally upright life? And can Terry resist the strong temptations posed by a life of crime when an honest life seems so difficult? Read the book to find out!

I believe this book would be of great interest to the Christian reader because of the moral dilemma at the heart of the story, and because of the lack of objectionable content. The YA reader would also be pleased as the hero, though older than the standard age 17, is youthful and just starting out in life.

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Friday, December 7, 2012

How Holly Lisle gets her Books Reviewed

This is what Holly Lisle does to get some reviews of her books on venues like Amazon.com and Barnes and Noble.

She asks, on her very lively and well-commented blog, for a group of reviewers who will receive a free PDF copy of her book. They read it and, Holly hopes, review it.

They send to Holly a link to the review and she checks it out. If they don't trash the book or indulge in personal vitriol against her, they are eligible for a free PDF copy the next time around.

She's hoping, in this way, to have a stable group of 25 reviewers to help her promote her books.

You can read more at: Nine Reviewer Openings for Warpaint. | Holly Lisle: Official Author Homepage. In fact, I recommend you stay and read a lot of things from Holly's blog, and become a regular reader of it, since Holly good at mentoring beginning writers through the information she provides there.

What is the lesson for the many of you out there who have a book out there--- self-published, traditionally published, small press, Lulu.com--- and need to get the word out?

Gather some reviewers by offering a free PDF copy of your book. I know that with my WP software, Open Office, it's pretty easy to make a PDF file.

Ask your readers, if they can, to post reviews in Amazon.com and like places. Ask them to contact you with the link to where they posted. Those who do can be the start of your own little inner circle of readers/reviewers.

One of my writer friends, Amanda Borenstadt, first contacted me when she found my blog, and she offered to let me have a free e-book copy of her book 'Syzygy' if I would review it. I accepted it, but I dreaded reading it because I was sure that a self-published book would be quite bad.

It turned out to be a great read and one I would recommend to others. And Amanda stayed on to be a regular reader of my blog and my number one commenter here. We've also become friends, which is kind of strange for me, since I have Asperger Syndrome, I don't have much experience with having friends.

Reading about Holly's reviewer-roundup method, it makes me wish I'd done that when my Lulu.com book came out. I may still do that, since I've long wanted to withdraw 'Opium Cactus' because of a few typos in it I didn't catch, and add some new poems, three short stories, and some articles on writing poetry from this blog.

I'm open to suggestions from my blog readers on what all will go in 'Opium Cactus: Bigger, Longer and Uncut' (or whatever I call it), and I'm also looking for a few volunteers who might like a free PDF copy and might be willing to write a review for me.

Tuesday, June 19, 2012

SYZYGY Book Trailer (Books have Trailers now, Who Knew?)



My writing friend Amanda Borenstadt has a book trailer out for her novel, Syzygy. I've read the book and it was worth every penny I paid for it. OK, Amanda gave me a free review copy, but it would have been worth every penny I paid for it if I'd paid for it.

To get to know Amanda better, you can visit her two blogs. One is called A Fortnight of Mustard and has won awards as one of the top condiment-related blogs in the galaxy. The other one is called something else, and is about the Catholic faith. (FYI, Catholics are Christians. If you don't believe me, you could look it up.)

Here is an official description of the plot of Syzygy which I stole from somewhere:
When the leader of Finn's clan orders him to kidnap Bea Jones, Finn falls crazy in love. He risks his life by betraying his clan to protect her. Finn Wilde is a computer-nerd trapped in a super strong body. He's one of the Fir Na Gealaí, whose strength and speed surpass those of ordinary men. The story is told by an alternately pensive then manic patient in a mental hospital. http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/21501
Note: the word 'syzygy' is a real word. If you use it playing hangman, you will probably win. Unless you are playing against Amanda Borenstadt.

Another Note: Amanda Borenstadt swears she is not Mr. Spock's mother.

Monday, February 20, 2012

The Realms Thereunder by Ross Lawhead

As young teens, Daniel Tully and Freya Reynolds went missing and discovered a world few know is real. After returning, life went on, but they were not left unmarked. Freya, a university student, has symptoms of OCD. Daniel is now homeless. And the strange world they once shared is bleeding into our own in dangerous ways....

Aftermath

How many books have I read where young people are whisked off into strange and dangerous worlds, and then come home with no aftereffects? I've always been interested in the effect of adventures on the adventurers. As a child I'd make up stories based on the aftermath of Star Trek episodes, and how the crew were traumatized by such things as the death of a redshirt.

The Realms Thereunder starts with two characters who have already had a big adventure and are marked by it. I like that. It shows that actions have consequences. Very realistic.

The Realms Thereunder also has a rune poem in it. Next time, if there is a next time, I will compare it to the traditional rune poems that I learned back when I was a Norse Pagan.

Routine government-demanded disclaimer:
I did NOT receive a review copy of this book, but bought a Kindle copy out of my own very tiny money supply. Even if I HAD received a review copy, the First Amendment of the US Constitution guarantees that I am under no obligation to mention it.

Write a Christian Poem for Lent!
Not a poet? Only a beginning writer? No matter! You are still invited to show your love for Jesus by writing a Christian poem this Lent. You don't have to be from a church that does Lent to qualify---- Protestants, Catholics, Evangelicals, Latter Day Saints and other followers of Christ are welcome.

Any style of poem is accepted, modern, traditional, words picked out of hats..... Contest is open NOW, for more details see Opium Cactus: Write a Christian Poem for Lent contest.

Book link -  http://www.amazon.com/Realms-Thereunder-Ancient-Earth/dp/1595549099/ (or some other link of your choice)
Author’s Web site  -  http://www.rosslawhead.com/blog/


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